Kurosawa-Maya

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name:Kurosawa Maya
age:17
rank:Chunin
village:Konohagakure no sato
appearence:Maya is a petite looking young woman standing at merely 5'4 her skin is almost as pale as porcelin with striking violet hair and crimson eyes to bout. she holds a family tatto upon her right shoulder blade of a tribal phoenix rising. normal attired in black or purple attire she fashions her headband around her forehead and tied next to her right ear.
jutsu:
Bunshin no Jutsu: the art of the dopplerganger
Dai Endan no jutsu: katon
Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique
Hayabusa Otoshi - Peregrine Falcon Drop

Character Description
Maya is at first appereance sullen and all around serious in actuality she is merely closed.off. untrusing of others in fear of betrayl and harm to her own being. once befriended maya is a somewhat normal ranbuncous and moody young woman. Maya highly favors dango and umeboshi pickles, maya holds dearly a small silver pendeant given to her at birth.

Backstory:
Maya was born born within the first week of maya outside the land of tea. Her own heritage came nowhere from shinobi, maya's mother' mameha was the high pristess of a shinto shrine in a small part f the village, her father was a oni wounded warrior. although the town feared the oni man mameha nursed him well and fell in love with him,although being ostersized and shuned the two married and barred two young daughters. Maya being the elder of the children would carry on the family oni blood earning her a somewhat unhuman apperance and natrual chakra.
the seventh year of maya's life her small village was raided and burnt to the ground her mother and father died protecting not only them but the other villlagers aswell. maya and her sister fled but lost one another,barely surviving a traveler took her with him. maya upon the brink of death for going days without water,food or rest was safe.
two days after her resuce the man asked of what happened.
"they're gone now..aren't they..." the small girl spoke out sullenly.
the male agreed to make her his own and once returning to the land of fire and the leaf village his wife and him took her to be their own.although maya's life became normal and anyother child's wonds would heal,her's merely remained uncared for her goal in life is too exact her revenge upon the group or person responsible for her family and villages death and to find her younger sister.[b]